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DriftingIf the pain still remains after so very long Does this mean you are doign something wrong? Are you holding onto the past refusing to let go Or is it just supposed to heal, so painfully slow How do you deserve this? is it really your fault you pray its a dream, that you'll awake with a jolt but the pain jsut goes on, not getting better at all your life seems so worthless, insignificant and small Has it been worth it have you learnt from your pain? or do you go over the same things again and again? But when you're crying like you've never cried before And it isn't stopping you juDrifting
by ~TwistedFate86
LifeAs we walk down lifes sad and lonely road We begin to long for things from this World Things we don’t deserve and never should have And things that are owed to us and will drive us madLife
We long for a partner and someone to hold Not understanding just how much love scolds Because true love is rarely and often never found And will often make you feel worse and more down
Your body tells you that you have fallen in love To justify all the feelings and emotions and stuff But love is just chemicals rushing round the brain To convince you having someone is worth all
by ~TwistedFate86
True FriendshipIf true friendship never ends. How can you find the perfect friend? And if you do then what is said? That proves true friendship is not dead If in truth your friend means so much Then there is no need for reasons and such Your feelings for them are proofs in themselves Of how you'll go with them through heaven and hellTrue Friendship
If true friendship never ends Life will be great with your perfect friend Sharing your problems your grief and sorrows With your true friend there is always tomorrow Never a problem to big or too small After you've told them not a problem at al
by ~TwistedFate86
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Darkness can be broken by just one beam of light.
Listenin to life but thinking of fish.
you've got some long stuff, but they seem very interesting....
um, yeah..I'll be watching you
1. There needs to be more of it. Let's see some more poems, or fiction, anything as long as you write it.
2. Try not to get hung up on rhyming couplets. Not every 2 lines have to rhyme (or slant-rhyme) with each other. Free verse doesn't have to rhyme. You can always skip lines, or use more than 2.
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